I know I'm terrible at character development. I also leave things out about characters that people might want to see or hear about. If you want to know anything about any of my characters, let me know and I'll write it into a current story or else another.
Your story, I'm relieved to say, is a basic skeleton for right now but with bits and piece of meat here and there such as the ending and in the middle during the escape from the ship. The ending is sketchy, but I do know what I want to do. ^^
Which piercings does the lady (I forgot her name) have and where?